“views of the abdomen demonstrate calcific densities in the liver and spleen, compatible with changes of chronic granulomatous disease.” Flesch-Kincaid reading level 15.4
More concisely written:
“abdominal image shows granulomas in the liver and spleen.” Flesch-Knicaid reading lever 8.8
Radiologists demonstrate things (see below). Images show things. “Show” is the better word in this case, and it’s also one syllable instead of three. As often as these words are used the savings to the report reader add up quickly.
Hepatic and splenic granulomas are an Aunt Minnie. Don’t need spend time describing them.
